Microfiction EC: Creation Myths
Both creation stories have calm waters at the beginning. |
The waters were calm when God first spoke. Suddenly light, air, and earth leapt into existence. Not finished yet, God created the first man and woman - Adam and Eve. The couple was very happy together in the garden God made for them until one day when Eve was tempted by the forbidden fruit. It was the only rule God had given the couple: don't eat from the tree. But Eve couldn't help herself, and Adam ate too. They could no longer live in the garden and were cast out of paradise. However, God had not given up on them yet.
Author's note: I was writing about the creation myth of Shintoism for my Storybook project this week, and I noticed certain similarities between it and the other creation story I am most familiar with (the water being present before creation occurs is really interesting). I wrote two 100 word stories about both so that the similarities were more apparent!
Rachel, I love how you seem to be so optimistic bout god's relationship with Adam and Eve. The two really are pretty similar! I hadn't read the first creation narrative before but its pretty cool the way they seem to run parallel with one another. Great job overall, but you could defiantly stand to add some more info!
ReplyDeleteHey Rachel!
ReplyDeleteI like that you chose to write about two different creation stories. For the Shintoism story, I think it would be great if you added a little more detail to it, mainly to explain some things that people might not be familiar with, like "kami." I didn't know that water existed before creation in the Judaism creation myth! That's super cool. Good job!